A WIP of wonder woman - 3DAllusions

Kadious · #1 (**permalink**) 08-28-2004, 02:39 AM

Here is a sketch I'm working on just thought I'd put it out for others to see a bit of the color and the original sketch, keep in mind it is WIP

TheAllusionist · #2 (**permalink**) 08-28-2004, 03:56 AM

Beautiful work kadious. She looks a little asian? Are you adding color digitaly? A couple items, I know it is a WIP. How the cape attaches or is supported seems a little bit of a mystery. Her left leg calf to ankle twist looks a little akward, but I think the cape is confusing things visualy and if the underside of her thigh in the hamstring area had an outward curve instead of a straight line it would all flesh out better. It is a great piece, don't get me wrong, just what I see FWIW Is she single?

Anonymous · #3 (**permalink**) 08-28-2004, 04:18 AM

Well, as far as i could see, the right arm is to thin, try to make that a bit thicker.

And the same goes for the right knee... Else the image is looking very impressive..

Obi

TheAllusionist · #4 (**permalink**) 08-28-2004, 07:22 AM

I believe the cape is overlapping the right arm hence it looks thin, but some of the arm is under the cape.

Kadious · #5 (**permalink**) 08-28-2004, 09:22 PM

Thanks for all the input, these are all issue I am working on..Yes I am working with digital colors...keep the comments coming

TheAllusionist · #6 (**permalink**) 08-28-2004, 09:57 PM

OK you asked for it! LOL I will actually wait to see more work, but one item to add implied motion to make it come alive. Cloaks are used a lot to add energy even if the figures pose is static, perhaps it could be a little more flowing and not as rigid. By here right calf are two bumps in the cloak that look a little rigid and the overall fall of it is perhaps rigid. OK I lied another thing, where her hip is covered/intersects the shield, the pencil shading/thick line makes it look very angular and slightly knobby, I think that it could appear more round and subtle.

Very nice work and it is coming around very nicely, just little things that are subjective, that IMHO could make it even more sexy.

Kadious · #7 (**permalink**) 08-30-2004, 06:47 PM

Yeah I have always sketched with sharp and hard edges I will normally soften them up in the color process

TheAllusionist · #8 (**permalink**) 08-30-2004, 09:04 PM

Yes, I noticed that the color version was softer, like I said, terrific work!

ddelcast · #9 (**permalink**) 08-31-2004, 01:23 AM

Sexy...

Kadious · #10 (**permalink**) 04-20-2005, 08:48 PM

Yet another needed up date.