Modern House Animation - 3DAllusions

bokkins · #1 (**permalink**) 12-18-2007, 06:50 PM

Hi guys, this is my recent addition to my animation folio. its a simple fly by animation of a modern house. (Design not mine, so I can't really do anything on that aspect. What I tried here, is to present it the best way I could. My apologies for sounding so defensive. Hence, this is actually the finish product of my previous WIP which wasn't accepted that well. LOL, nobody's fault though.) Anyway, here is the link to my animation>>

. - Architectural Animation 01

...and some interiors

TheAllusionist · #2 (**permalink**) 12-18-2007, 07:06 PM

You are really getting into the animation stuff! I think the beginning is too dragged out, I think you wanted to follow the car all the way up to the house, to me seeing it approach and then going to the house at a much faster pace and then having the car pull up as you faded away to the next sequence would have flowed better. Just my opinion

bokkins · #3 (**permalink**) 12-18-2007, 07:21 PM

thanks Russell, I think you're right. I'm still getting my way through this animation stuff, I should learn more about cinematography. I will take this project as my stepping stone to a higher level. I hope my next project will be more convincing and livelier, these are my goals. thanks again Russ, you're opinion means a lot.

neil · #4 (**permalink**) 12-19-2007, 07:25 AM

Hey Bookins, Looks nice. I know there are certain constrain in animation projects but still I think you need to work more with the lighting and material shaders

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mharris · #5 (**permalink**) 01-26-2008, 04:43 AM

nice work! keep it up!