Linving wip - 3DAllusions

LordRaven · #1 (**permalink**) 03-22-2007, 11:47 AM

Hello again guys,

I have received great feedback last time when I have posted on this forum, so I have decided to post this one at an early stage in the wip section.
Tell me if you see something wrong so far, and if you have any kind of suggestions please let me know also.

Regards,
Alex

kiittea · #2 (**permalink**) 03-22-2007, 01:05 PM

Hmmmm Idon't see anything wrong yet.. its coming out great ... waiting for the next step

TheAllusionist · #3 (**permalink**) 03-22-2007, 03:46 PM

I agree looks great so far, some noise on the window mullions, but the main thing is to add more to the room and get it all working together, great so far.

waheednasir · #4 (**permalink**) 03-22-2007, 10:26 PM

looks nice. and i echo russell on adding more stuff, im sure already have that in your mind. i would personaly go for some beanbag kinda stuff, with some indoor plants, but all according to the composition and focus.

good going..all the best.

LordRaven · #5 (**permalink**) 03-23-2007, 02:11 PM

Thanks for the feedback guys!
I have attached an update. Actually the client liked this way and gave me the "ok" to render a high res for him. However, I will continue working on it further for my portfolio, because there are some things that I would like to change (I will start with changing the color of the dark tiles in front with something a little more bright; probably the plant on the left will be replaced too).

If you have further suggestion (including on the design part) I'd be happy to hear them.

P.S. I don't exactly understand what you mean by "beanbag". Could you please explain a little bit further? (English is not my native)

abir · #6 (**permalink**) 03-23-2007, 03:47 PM

comming up well man....cheers

d.sign · #7 (**permalink**) 03-24-2007, 12:34 AM

I like the design and mood, I would not change the color of tiles and so, all work pretty well and harmonius in term of color choice and light, however, for me distrbing thing is sofa. It simply do not match the style of the room.
The minimalistic, japanese style design of the space need something lower and simpler, yet some bolder form, bit of avantguarde piece could make it really great.
I would recomend you to check out some of the furniture manufacturers like from Itally, like B&B, Cappellini, Minotti...

TheAllusionist · #8 (**permalink**) 03-24-2007, 01:53 AM

I think d.signs suggestion is a good one.

neil · #9 (**permalink**) 03-24-2007, 09:11 AM

Nice work. Lighting and renderig looks fine.
I expect in next scene there will be few more elements.

LordRaven · #10 (**permalink**) 03-24-2007, 11:57 PM

Thanks! I think you are wright. The sofa has got to go.