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courtyard
have some time for this one..so shoot
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04-10-2007, 08:36 PM
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Re: courtyard
That is a very nice rendering and the pavers are all centered, very nice. The tree looks Great, is it 3D or post production? I guess the symetry is the only thing hurting the image in my opinion, it is very nice, just symetrical.
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the render is fantastic. cant get more realistic than this!....
however its abit plain. it seems that the focus of the image is the tree. im not so sure tho if thats your intention but if not i suggest you recomposing the camera angle? probably not a single point perspective if your intetion was to focus more on the space. but then again as i have said, the render looks real! please allow mee to share some thots on the colors   the sharpness can reduce tho.. its just my preference. however, i added a bit more contrast for your image. and added a lens distortion abit to simluate a zoom lens
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04-11-2007, 05:16 AM
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Hey Prem terrific render.. looks damn real.. esp the tree
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04-11-2007, 05:48 AM
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well its a part of an animation screenie... the tree is onyx .... thanks for the softening idea... i will get that done
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04-11-2007, 05:53 AM
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Lighting looks great...but the shadows look very sharp...maybe you can use area shadows..?
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04-11-2007, 06:17 AM
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i could and shoot my rendertimes
 .... would have worked if it was a still but animation i gotta cut a few corners
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WOW,Beautiful rendering . Looking very very realistic. Great job done
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nicely coming up, i like the overall scene. But as already commented above lighting needs some more touch. One more point, the building looks too clean and symmetrical, can you do something to it? its a great work
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Re: courtyard
I like it. I don't think the symmetry is that bad. If the tree moved to the right 5-6 feet then it would help balance the opening in the the first level of the courtyard and the rock. Nice.
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