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this is coming out well, so i thought i will ask your advice to make it better and prick my sore eyes..
for starters i know that glass balcony is off....any other things you guys see is off or seem apparent to you
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04-13-2007, 05:22 PM
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Re: photomontaging
Looking good, the roof shingles are tiling noticeably, otherwise looks pretty good!
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04-13-2007, 05:41 PM
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 Dear prem, very nice work man. very nice.
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04-13-2007, 10:04 PM
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Re: photomontaging
I am not sure what are the client wishes, but what I would add here is couple of trees and shrubs. There is no single tree there. Otherwise the picture is really good. All the things that may be off now could be hidden with good positioning of the trees...
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04-13-2007, 10:25 PM
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Re: photomontaging
well let me ask if i can add trees... the client required a perfect positioning of the building to get approval ...so what do you think is off?
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04-14-2007, 07:51 AM
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Nice work Kippu, Effects are quite brilliant
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04-14-2007, 08:13 AM
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Mario, its a very nice work. i like the texturing and lighting.
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04-14-2007, 10:50 AM
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Re: photomontaging
I actually do not see anything off, I like the image very much, but you said something about glass railings that you think are off, and Russell mentioned roof tile texture. I just think that with couple of trees, positioned clever, all that is perhaps not perfect could be ballanced...
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04-14-2007, 12:55 PM
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Its looking very good Kippu! I suppose the client must have specified the output ratio...its just that presently, sky occupies more than half of the image...if you could crop up some portion of the sky...
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04-15-2007, 03:39 PM
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Re: photomontaging
Kippu
It looks to dark. Am I right in assuming we are looking at the second building in? You need to get a bit of sun and shadows in there. I would also get a bit closer it looks as though you are showing the first building... you can show the end gable of the adjoining for reference but look at what you need to show, which is the new build? It looks as though the front edge of the new bit were it joins the pavement is floating a bit. Can you post a higher res image so we can see more? Lee
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