bedroom - wip

[kippu]

i can do with some comments for this one.... please forgive the colors if they hurt your eyes ... i had nothing to do with it except put it there and follow orders



maybe those photo frames gotta go

[TheAllusionist]

I don't really have anything say except for, perhaps the red throw pillows seem all clones and squashing one up a bit here and there might help the scene as would some work or a new background image. Otherwise, nice work

[d.sign]

No reason to be unhappy with this one... nice image really...
Except what Russell already mentioned, I would say you could use some nicer plant on the right foreground and a bit or work on the outside part... terrace floor is too saturated for my taste, background also...

[neil]

Hey Kippu, Nice scene. I like the colour combination. Hey I agree with you about the photoframes. If there will be a single photoframe may be it looks better. I agree with Branko about treeace floor. May be you can change the pillow shader bit......

[BrianMyers]

I like your scene. If I had to change anything I would likely either pick a different plant or remove it from the scene. I'm also a bit confused by the carpet, while I like the look/material it's also casting a shadow as if it's "crumpled" up in spots, but the thickness I would expect from the material doesn't seem to lend to it (perhaps the created surface is slightly too thing for the applied material)? But very good work overall!

[kippu]

alright i got it ,,, photoframes , background , outside terrace , plant and carpet ... cheers , thanks for all the help