House exterior - 3DAllusions

razordc · #1 (**permalink**) 12-31-2007, 02:06 AM

Hello everybody.

This is WIP, not rendered at final quality.
I really need some advice on this.

This is not a commercial render, just doing it to learn.

I attached last render. Where I got stuck. I need some professional advice on how to improve. I would be grateful. I worked so much on this, I can't see anything else

I am using Max and Vray 1.5. Physical sun, sky and camera. Irr and lc for GI. Gamma 1.0

Thanks,
Cristian

TheAllusionist · #2 (**permalink**) 12-31-2007, 02:36 AM

I will not comment on the architecture itself, but the rendering is very nice. Comments would be that maybe a bit over exposed/blown out on the gable ends, hard to tell what the siding is. Driveway apron to curb transition needs work. The thing that really jumps out to me is that the bushes look like they poke out of the grass instead of out of a flower bed, I would add earth and a lawn edge around those areas.

It is a nice rendering for the most part techically, I would pick more exciting subject matter if I was going to do something for fun and practice, but that is just me

neha · #3 (**permalink**) 12-31-2007, 05:13 AM

Apart from the points Russell has mentioned, it seems you have used vray dirt for the gable material. You can increase the subdivisions for it...looks very noisy right now. You can also do some post work on it...for images like this it is most convenient to do the finishing in post work, especially the landscape, BG and final color & lighting corrections.

neil · #4 (**permalink**) 12-31-2007, 07:04 AM

Nice one. I like the lighting and rendering. May be the grasses and plants would be bit brighter.

razordc · #5 (**permalink**) 12-31-2007, 12:20 PM

thanks for the fast replays. I'll work more on this afte new year.
Thant big bright white part on the house should have some displacement but my system can't handle so much displacement

. I'll have to upgrade my system for that.

Happy new year.
C ya in 2008,
Cristian

vinametal · #6 (**permalink**) 01-22-2008, 05:18 PM

I' am like

But is much bright.

bye

bokkins · #7 (**permalink**) 01-23-2008, 02:12 AM

Quality of work is already very good. and if the goal here is to present a visualization of a house, you've already made it. but if you really want to push it a little more, I would suggest you read on photography magazines and books for composition. physical composition, color composition, and maybe add some more elements as not to exposed to much grass. maybe a tree in the foreground, but not hiding the house or maybe just a little overlap of both. good luck!

razordc · #8 (**permalink**) 01-23-2008, 05:22 PM

Hello,
thanks for the replay.

I want to make it like a visualisation but I also want it to look as realistic as could.
I am very busy this month, I have to let this project for february.