house 3808 - 3DAllusions

simplychen · #1 (**permalink**) 04-05-2008, 01:47 AM

got some feedback already on VD, close being the final, would like to know what yall think...Horhe, you out there? i need your pro vision, lol (low res)

houses in Lubbock, TX. i know, it's suppose to be desert, but for the sake of archviz, i dressed it up

Horhe · #2 (**permalink**) 04-05-2008, 02:02 AM

LOL is my browser broken? Its a woman with a mike taking off her 2nd shoe... nice work in progress

simplychen · #3 (**permalink**) 04-05-2008, 02:04 AM

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Originally Posted by Horhe

LOL is my browser broken? Its a woman with a mike taking off her 2nd shoe... nice work in progress

that wasn't a critic, now is it? you are suppose to say it's bad so i can improve? and i dont' think i am seeing the lovely lady...so i think it's MY computer that's broken there

Horhe · #4 (**permalink**) 04-05-2008, 02:17 AM

ehm.... the house youve posted here looks like this in my browser:

Horhe · #5 (**permalink**) 04-05-2008, 02:30 AM

Crits:

1) Roof tiles to small
2) Trees need a more direct sunlight/shadow - now they are lit to evenly - they have a feel that they were pasted in
3) Shrubs near the entrance tiling in places
4) Wood on roof side could a (little more) hint of texture and variation
5) Entrance glass could use some transparency (IMO)
6) Model the tiles you lazy arse

7) Dont like the colour of the fence - too orange little less saturation IMO.
8) Run over cat on the street missing.

Rest is great - really liking this.

TheAllusionist · #6 (**permalink**) 04-05-2008, 02:45 AM

Good list Horhe, I would say that the street, orange fence and roof tile size are the major culprits and in that order, they are what I think people will notice most. Overall it is a nice rendering.

If you model roof tiles, you have too much time on your hands! LOL I actually have really wondered why someone hasn't developed a plugin or program for that and perhaps siding...... I would pay a few hundred dollars for that!

simplychen · #7 (**permalink**) 04-05-2008, 02:53 AM

what could help with the street? i was thinking multiply in some textures in post.

that image is raw image, so i could tweak the trees highlight/shadow in ps, really...if i have time

Horhe · #8 (**permalink**) 04-05-2008, 03:03 AM

yep might work - try roughing it a bit

TheAllusionist · #9 (**permalink**) 04-05-2008, 03:07 AM

Noise and cloud laters for grungh turned down to hardly opaque and a rubber tire skid mark on the curb in one place and on the street, all subdued, this would add some realism to it.

simplychen · #10 (**permalink**) 04-05-2008, 04:41 AM

changes were made