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11-04-2008, 09:29 AM
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Sample renders of an interior bar
Hi everybody
Just dropped by to show you some renders of an interior scene of a bar. I am trying to finish it so… any comments would be welcome. Regards 
    
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11-04-2008, 11:08 AM
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Re: Sample renders of an interior bar
Lots of very nice content. I think that it's to dark. You might want to try to adjust the exposure in PS. The walls texture seems a bit heavy. I had to look twice to see the wine bottle, perhaps some table lights? Keep going.
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11-04-2008, 12:21 PM
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Re: Sample renders of an interior bar
The scene is too dark. Objects are hardly recognisable. Sofa and chairs are not very realistic, may be you can use different kind of textures on them and bit modification of modeling I think require.
Keep it up. Hope to see the updates very soon.
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11-04-2008, 06:53 PM
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Re: Sample renders of an interior bar
It is a difficult balance you need to walk to pull off this rendering because it is a bar and it is suppost to be dark. The trick is to keep seating area dark, but focus light on tables where drinks would be and then use underlighting like at the bar and behind the bar back wall.
For the most part it looks like you have good content, we just can't see it or comment on it. Some texturing isn't very appealing, some of what I assume is concrete looks like it has exposed spray on fireproofing on it and the white wall looks like it has popcorn ceiling treatment. A few more tweaks and I think you can pull it off
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11-05-2008, 06:24 AM
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Re: Sample renders of an interior bar
Hi again
thank you all for your very useful comments.I will try to put them in practice . You know that i am new in this forum so Can you please tell me where can i upload the new photos of the same project? In this thread or in a new one? Best regards
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11-05-2008, 06:59 AM
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Re: Sample renders of an interior bar
Welcome to 3DA Savtwin.
Though this work is in process then you can upload your updates in this thread. For finished work, You can upload to our "Finished Work of Art" section and In our gallery. Keep showing your work buddy 
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11-09-2008, 11:23 AM
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Re: Sample renders of an interior bar
nice work, adding some spot lights and some cove lights on the bar area will enhance your render.
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