exterior: a building 2 - 3DAllusions

pradipta · #1 (**permalink**) 02-22-2005, 05:59 PM

here is another i finished few days before. this is a different model. i made three version of it. would like to have some views, thanks

pradipta · #2 (**permalink**) 02-22-2005, 06:08 PM

here are the files

TheAllusionist · #3 (**permalink**) 02-22-2005, 08:31 PM

pradipta, You are a posting machine today, great job! Here are my first impressions: The jogging tile roof bothers me, the brick seems way overscaled and I wonder how the porch roof stands up. But as usual the lighting and texturing (with the exception of the brick size) is great. I hope that didn't sound harsh, just a couple items that jumped out at me right away. I love seeing your work posted here, you are always putting together something interesting and well done.

CivicDuty · #4 (**permalink**) 02-23-2005, 03:16 AM

Hello Pradipta. I like the rendering so far., but the ground really pops out at me. Its almost like you didn't scale the material or the wrong mapping parameters are set. The porch overhang needs some detail. Maybe the beams supporting it get shown. And lastly, the building looks strange with no reflection on the glass, and no transparency. I really think you are on the right trck though so keep it up and please keep posting.

Jason

speedline · #5 (**permalink**) 02-23-2005, 07:09 AM

Hi..The Allusionist and CivicDuty said all on this, for me I like more the 2nd image. It's more quite, calm. The porch needs a truss maybe...
Great work yours as always.
Cheers

pradipta · #6 (**permalink**) 02-23-2005, 07:33 PM

thanks russell, civicDuty and speedine for your feedbacks.

russell: yes, i think porch roof need some more work.

civicDuty: yes, this is in wip and will correct all these things before final render. thanks for your comments,