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Old 06-01-2008, 08:25 AM
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Re: Kitchen

Actually you did very good.
I could give you couple of comments though
- background is a bit overexposed and burned out...
- shelves in the corner are problematic... they do not work so well, better try without them... or try to find some other solution for that corner...
-light is very nice, but I think overall whiteness is too strong and contrast also... You could try to experiment a bit with colors, give it a bit of cream color or white coffee or so, to the cabinets and one not so dark to the bar element. You can also play with exposure and tone mapping a bit...
-reflection of chairs in the bar element look a bit odd, try to make it a bit blurry and add a slight noise bump to make it look not so perfect and flat, like real chromium surface...
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Re: Kitchen

You could populate the kitchen a bit more with things like fruits/drinks to introduce more colors into the render. Also like Branko said, the reflections on the bar chairs look a bit odd. Although I find the exterior exposure ok...it could be like this in a photograph with a brightly light outside and darker interior. Overall, great work!
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Re: Kitchen

Hello,

It is a nice kitchen, with a somewhat cool atmosphere. The colour scheme could be improved, perhaps.

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