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07-27-2008, 12:23 PM
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Exterior Works
Hi all..
i'm back with some exteior images a high rise exterior building and low rise building please give you valuable critique and comment Thanks Cheers Nelson Liaw this is a 50 storey building, located in latvia Just a conceptual design     an office in jakarta   a Japanese house in Jakarta  By neellss at 2008-06-24 Residential in vietnam  
    
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07-27-2008, 07:19 PM
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Re: Exterior Works
Now you are just making us look bad
 Visually to me the light beam on the tower looks like it is going to the right just a tad and not vertical but that could easily be an illusion due to the angle of the building. Basically if that is all I can see to really comment it shows how pretty flawless your renderings are I do have to ask, on the last two images why you have fans outside, that could be common practice in other countries, I just have to ask because I am curious, not challenging it.Note: I checked the verticalness of the light and it is correct, 'My Bad' 
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07-27-2008, 07:57 PM
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Not fond of the wrapped mesh styled exteriors - sort of makes one's eyes jump around.
 Very good renders though.  Would like to see them in brighter daylight. Scenes have a more positive vibe if lit up well. Ok my screen brightness is set low. Transferred the pics to my main PC and the lighting is ok - the image quality is at peak - really good. What software did you use? Last edited by cybeo; 07-27-2008 at 08:31 PM.
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07-27-2008, 11:07 PM
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Putting you on the front page is starting to become a habit
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07-27-2008, 11:33 PM
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Re: Exterior Works
nice work buddy, well commented already.
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07-28-2008, 12:59 AM
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Excellent work! I do not like the tower architecture too much, but images are great, especially last two...
Office building in Jakarta show your skills very good, but I think the Japanese house and residential in Vietnam are best work exhibited here... My favorite is definitely Japanese house... I like the mood, color palette, materials, water, all works very good with style of architecture... overall impression is strongest in that image...
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07-28-2008, 03:58 AM
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Great works.... I agree with Branko ... all the images are good ... but the japanese house is really wonderful. It's got a great mood and the composition is well done ( looks like the rule of the thirds) ..more than that .. it very artistic ..... Great Job
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07-28-2008, 06:23 AM
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Great works and renders. All works to me is a great sense of visualization. I really love the Japanese house in Jakarta, beautiful
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