BioTech Spider

[Cleverson MsLeal]

hi guys,
good see you again!

I wanna show my last work.. i modeled a bionic spider for my project of conclusion course of university, and I took advantage of the model to compose a scene.

http://www.3dallusions.com/forum/alb...php?pic_id=239


please comment
i need of yours feedback

thanks

[TheAllusionist]

Freakin A! I personally hate spiders and this bad boy gives me the creeps! It is a fantastic piece, but I will give a couple comments on it since a piece this good warrants them:

1). Hair/Fur looks a little soft and cuddly, it would look more wicked if it was courser and more prickly.

2). Web pattern doesn't look like a real spiders web pattern which pretty much a signature pattern that most people will notice.

3). The web should droop a little especially under the spiders weight.

Like I said, I hate spiders, know thine enemy as it were.

It is a very nice piece and I hope you take it as it was meant, positive suggestions that could make it even better. It is great to see you post at the site again, we missed your presense. Keep up the great work!

[Kadious]

Awesome...I love spiders...the only think I would say to change is the background, most large spiders don't spin webs between trees , they put them over grass and moss and pounce on there prey. Or you could scale down the size of the spider.