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Old 10-13-2008, 12:05 PM
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Smile Robo 01

Here my new project i will call it robo 01, do it in my free time ( well i don't the think the name yet because it still WIP).

Still need a lot of detail on this, and not design the cockpit yet (well i have a lot time so i don't need to worry he he he he )

Hope you like it, and feel free to comment like always
will update soon

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Old 10-13-2008, 03:22 PM
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Re: Robo 01

i like it already. good job. just a little observation, the legs are too far apart, moving it closer will, I think, help the balance. good luck on this one.
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Re: Robo 01

Looking good so far, are you going to animate it? I would say the feet are too small IMHO
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Re: Robo 01

Many thanks Bokkins and Russel for your comment, I will fix the robo leg soon

On These project i will focus on still image russel, will give a lot detail to robo with heavy armor, weapon, and create the detail for robo enviroment like hangar or war scenic ( im still thinking about it )

And honestly i only have a little experience with animation creation, it very difficult for me. and i still learn about that. so maybe animation maybe will be the last priority i think.


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Re: Robo 01

Add a little detail in weapon on the robo right side, not fixing the leg and cockpit yet ( lot of distraction today fiuuh,), and will go to other town until next week, so there is no update until then ...

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Re: Robo 01

Its looking ok.
Dont get me wrong, but the complexity and parts look more like home made. Search the net for reference, the parts could be more sophisticated in terms of appearance. Definetally worth checking out the transformers models, of course creating a bot like that would be simply overkill

Of course this is just my opinion

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Re: Robo 01

the latest image looks convincing. I like the pose and the angle of your camera here. good luck!
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Re: Robo 01

Nice modeling. I like the joint part.
I think more detailing can enhance you model. I agree with Russell (A.K.A Allusionist) about feet part. Keep it up .
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Nice modeling. I like the joint part.
I think more detailing can enhance you model. I agree with Russell (A.K.A Allusionist) about feet part. Keep it up .
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