Charrette #11 - Modern House Part One - Exterior

[kiittea]

Looking real good Jake..love the mood. Only thing that pops to me is the grass.. Looks like tiling is little big

[d.sign]

Jake, beautifull lightning!
I really like this one!
Couple of notes though
- grass texture needs to be smaller
- bushes in front of the house are too big
- darken up the sky to look more like dusk, that would match your light better
- add some tree line (dark too) behind the house...

I would keep this angle and lightning for sure... (perhaps just a bit less light in some of the interior rooms...)

[Rod]

Hey Jake, can't see why you'd say you dislike landscape, It's looking strong so far... thanks for the update, wanting to see more....

[sile]

Jake, very nice texturing. Good start

[Jake]

Originally Posted by d.sign

Jake, beautifull lightning!
I really like this one!
Couple of notes though
- grass texture needs to be smaller
- bushes in front of the house are too big
- darken up the sky to look more like dusk, that would match your light better
- add some tree line (dark too) behind the house...

I would keep this angle and lightning for sure... (perhaps just a bit less light in some of the interior rooms...)

Yea, I agree about the grass. I intentionally made it a little large to prevent tiling etc. I is also just a base for additional grass textures to come. Can't have a putting green on a 45 degree slope can we?

Hey, Branko, I like big bushes. Prehistoric scale.

Sky still needs a lot of work too.

Still working on trees in background. Didn't like my first try so I deleted them. I like quirkier looking trees so I need to make some or go out and take some photos. I use Onyx once in a while but never really had any great success with the resulting trees.

I'll try a little more tomorrow! Can we submit more than one angle? I still haven't decided what viewpoint I like best.

Thanks for you help folks.

[neha]

Wow Jake...its going great!!

[Fat Man]

A couple of test images hope you like I had a little spare time in which to play.

[TheAllusionist]

Great start 'Fat Man', I like your ground treatment a lot.

[simplychen]

Originally Posted by Fat Man

A couple of test images hope you like I had a little spare time in which to play.

mr fat man, you have put my brother's name to shame.

which render engine are you using, i am interested to know

[Horhe]

Good going Jake! Altough there is something missing in the image - composition wise - in the top right corner - you could try inserting some tree leaves just in the corner - should look more balanced IMO.