Charrette #11 - Modern House Part One - Exterior - Page 42 - 3DAllusions

TheAllusionist · #**411** (**permalink**) 06-19-2008, 05:38 PM

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Originally Posted by 540u1

update the First one,and add one more scene for skill test.

Really exciting this time,maybe try the day scene later.

I had actually thought if I was to find time to do one that I would do a simplistic cascading fountain with two short drops and one long one (Wall with water) into a baisin below and an outdoor patio and garden in the areas that some of your fountain is in. You have a brilliant idea there, I must say

d.sign · #**412** (**permalink**) 06-19-2008, 07:02 PM

540u1, your first image is beautiful, no doubt about it...
Ideas in second images are great, but I think it need a bit more coherence between elements and materials applied...
I would choose between one of the elements, either lower terrace or fountains... Personally, I like more the lower terrace... I think it goes well with the house. However, I think some lighter sunbed would be more appropriate instead of this heavy wooden one...

sfr · #**413** (**permalink**) 06-19-2008, 08:52 PM

I am dropping the w.c. idea I had. Here is the same image from earlier with more aggressive ps treatment.

All the images keep getting better here. Some really nice work.

am34012 · #**414** (**permalink**) 06-19-2008, 09:01 PM

Alright, so my hope of modernizing American suburbs (to fit cars into garages) just died, and I am back to European landscape. For this challenge, I decided to make 2 detail renderings, and this is my latest WIP. Its getting closer to final, and I will not accept any strict criticism at this point

. Thanks!

Horhe · #**415** (**permalink**) 06-19-2008, 10:06 PM

Wow nice progress everyone, nice images. A lot is going on here!

Horhe · #**416** (**permalink**) 06-19-2008, 10:12 PM

Sfr - looking nice - Im not sure bout the leaves that are blown by the wind - they seem too big, too many and the wind whirl looks a bit too uniform. The grass blades have a pattern that is visible to the eye thus making them a little unnatural... my 5 cents..

Horhe · #**417** (**permalink**) 06-19-2008, 10:15 PM

am34012 your images look nice - the main issue is material tiling. Try and add some variation to your textures. Like the towels and the wine!

am34012 · #**418** (**permalink**) 06-19-2008, 10:59 PM

Yes, thats my next step, fixing the textures.

jjsalang · #**419** (**permalink**) 06-19-2008, 11:01 PM

Hi, this is my 2nd In Progress stage. Thanks for comment D.sign.

I need to put more furniture later. I think this will be my one of view.

I'm gonna work on close-up view later this week.

comments are welcome! This is getting fun challenge!

Horhe · #**420** (**permalink**) 06-20-2008, 02:37 AM

I decied to have a go at this for fun... just a quick mock up.